Edit Ruthlessly and Test in the Wild
Delete throat-clearing phrases and merge overlapping ideas. Replace passive constructions with active verbs. One designer trimmed a bloated hero into twelve words and immediately saw visitors spend longer on case studies.
Edit Ruthlessly and Test in the Wild
Reading aloud exposes awkward rhythm and jargon. Next, watch a friend navigate your portfolio without hints. Note where they stall, skim, or smile; those moments reveal precise lines to rewrite or emphasize.